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Post  joe moore 73 on Thu Sep 29, 2011 9:56 pm

he’s from a different era
a wearer of passion versus fashion
not into flashing but into seclusion
he keeps it moving at the amusement of amazement
dude amazes men because he’s not phased by friends
he’s a loaner, a prone to be alone when you see me
kind of person
not into clubbing or churchin
but usually with a pen and pad rehearsing
his verse in the monologue of life
dawg this dude nice with words
nouns and verbs he keeps them on a short leash
at least three feet from his shoulder
he holds his ink in a holster
I think he supposed to be rapper slash a emcee
but to me he’s a graffiti artist
I can see the heart of his art regardless of his approach
he’s fresh
he’s def
he’s dope
I hope cats are taking copious notes
how to showboat talent balanced with humility
the feeling be the ceiling peeling revealing his cerebellum
the numerous categories of stories and how he tells em
how his gifts shifts and myths he dispels them
got masterpieces in his thesis but refuses to sell them
because how close to his heart he held them before sharing
tearing his aorta on order pour the mortar on paper
the pay per view is long over due
but to stay to true to his craft
he avoids the ploy of the popular path
he rather properly graph graffiti neatly
on the on coming train of thought about pass
this is where his work gets stashed
amassed amongst the masses
underground
where the real poets are found

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Post  SunSet Rivers on Tue Oct 18, 2011 1:37 pm

For starters, why did I find myself going to dictionary.com and look up copious? But I dug this. I'm half sleep so I know I missed most of it but I'm going to catch it again after a long nap.... Embarassed
I've missed your style. Hope to see you dropping more around this joint.
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Post  abstruse roots on Thu Oct 20, 2011 12:00 pm

word....this piece flowed above me lovely when i was reading it....

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Post  SunSet Rivers on Thu Oct 20, 2011 12:38 pm

abstruse roots wrote:word....this piece flowed above me lovely when i was reading it....

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You have it sounding like a cloud of purp...
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Post  abstruse roots on Thu Oct 20, 2011 1:00 pm

SunSet Rivers wrote:
abstruse roots wrote:word....this piece flowed above me lovely when i was reading it....

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You have it sounding like a cloud of purp...

more like blueberry kush....

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Post  SunSet Rivers on Thu Oct 20, 2011 1:39 pm

abstruse roots wrote:
SunSet Rivers wrote:
abstruse roots wrote:word....this piece flowed above me lovely when i was reading it....

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You have it sounding like a cloud of purp...

more like blueberry kush....

AR

I always heard of those flavors but never had a chance to experience...
too bad!
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